英文诗:学生们的诗与远方

高中生的英文诗和远方

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1995

Poems

选修六unit2是鉴赏英文的诗歌,最后一课的作业是让学生们模仿写英文诗。学生们的才华让我赞叹AMAZING,请大家欣赏几首吧

1

Teachers

Strict, friendly

Speaking, writing, smiling

Class on, class off

Three years

—方墨林

简评:在学生眼里三年高中眨眼就会过去,老师时而严厉时而慈祥,上课的印象最深的莫过于“Class Begins”和“Class is over”。 再读一遍,作为老师不禁感叹,人生能有几个three years, 送走一届学生,又迎来新生,接下来的三年会不会成为Ctrl+C和Contl+V呢?

2

Slowly he came from the path

Slowly he gave her the cloth

Slowly she fell in love with that man

Slowly she was accustomed to waiting on the distructed land.

Happily they agreed on the date

Happily she expected the coming day

Happily she married him

Happily she wished to have a good time.

Sadly he changed his heart

Sadly he never smiled to her

Sadly the man could escape

Sadly she couldn’t escape

Finally it was like a rose growing on the fertilizer

Finally she reallized

Finally the love was like a chain

Finally she would never love again

—宋依睿

简评:没想到小宋同学竟然能写出四个stanza, 每段不同的开头,凸显了每一节的主题,陷入爱河是缓慢的,步入婚姻是幸福的,变心是令人伤心的,结局是让人领悟深刻的。每个小结的押韵也做的非常好。

3

Wind blows all night小楼一夜东风劲

Old memories make you cry 故园催人泪下不自禁

Willows still stand there 东窗梧桐依旧立

Sorrow and despair 已然无神意

Ask what’s your feeling 问君此去几多情

Friends sad about your leaving 父老折柳饯吾行

—孙永鑫

简评:本诗最大的亮点是英汉对照,汉语诗和英文诗的押韵都做的非常棒。小孙同学真是有才啊。

4

A poem for you

It snows in the sky

A boy is waiting for you at night

Birds fly

people sigh

he wants to say hi

for his love is so bright

but you just turn away

never let him say goodbye

—杨续淼

简评:雪夜,春心萌动的少年独自等待心仪的女孩,却又不知道说什么好,苦思冥想出来一句Hi,却已经没有机会表白。花开堪折直须折,莫待无花空折枝。

5

When you look up at the starring sky

Stay there and don’t move your eye

Under the moonlight

The shadow of flowers is high

Don’t be shy

You’re the hero of the sight

I’ll stay by your side,

Forever if you like

—李嘉禾

简评:又是一首爱情诗,这次是女孩向男孩表白。不过,starring sky 和 moonlight能同时出现吗?LOL瑕不掩瑜。

06

Slowly the queen finds her losing pie

Slowly the carpenterworm transformed into a butterfly

Slowly Alice retrieves her momory

Slowly the Hatter protects his family

Slowly the girl arrives in the wonderland

Slowly the woman is equal to the man.

—许妍

简评:本诗把众多童话故事融入到一首诗中,可见平时小许同学读书不少。

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